The sound is scratchy and the plot is predictable.
The sound is really bad quality and very loud; if are unable to get rid of the scratchiness, at least try to lower the volume so it's bearable.
And the plot was extremely predictable; I mean, wow, who'dathunk he'd kill himself when he sees that his flash get bad reviews? Never seen that one before, oh, except for in the billions of other flash exactly like it where the exact same thing down to even the most minute detail happens.
Now, there's no problem with being unoriginal with the plot, but at least try to do it in an aesthetically pleasing or creative manner. Try to add a little bit of animation to your flash rather than dragging around a few images. If you suck at animation, at least stretch and squash the images that you have so they look slightly alive.