Gokenshadow's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[SS - The Math of God]

Dah.

I kind of blanked out during the stuff you said about the harmonics in the triangle, so I don't know if I'm referring to the correct idea, but being the type of person I am, the fact that every single system of harmonics happens to be located in the top half of the triangle makes me want to build a system of harmonics in the bottom half just to prove it wrong.

RiverJordan responds:

That wouldn't prove it wrong, you'd just have to switch starting spots :P

[Random Sh*t]

Nednes sanda!

Yuven mrovit shneves addlin sanda tarshnid fursha, maneven! Neekvet, tershed alvit hadred, noro yuven achivit gaten betnash.

Goden biden, ent goden lakash!

L33TN1NJ4 responds:

I DON'T UNDERSTAND YOUR LANGUAGE!@#

[Doodle's Final Adventure]

The sound is scratchy and the plot is predictable.

The sound is really bad quality and very loud; if are unable to get rid of the scratchiness, at least try to lower the volume so it's bearable.

And the plot was extremely predictable; I mean, wow, who'dathunk he'd kill himself when he sees that his flash get bad reviews? Never seen that one before, oh, except for in the billions of other flash exactly like it where the exact same thing down to even the most minute detail happens.

Now, there's no problem with being unoriginal with the plot, but at least try to do it in an aesthetically pleasing or creative manner. Try to add a little bit of animation to your flash rather than dragging around a few images. If you suck at animation, at least stretch and squash the images that you have so they look slightly alive.

VioletVulpine responds:

I decompressed the sounds.

[Heil's New Grounds]

Great!

This is the funniest flash ever! Good job!

Heil responds:

i no

[..:Hel:..]

Umm, a picture?

It's just a picture so I'll say you need to work on,
1. Animation, there was none.
2. Art, there was hardly any.
3. Style, this style is horrible.
4. Violence, there was none.

That's all I have to say.

[System of a Down "CUBErt"]

Pretty good.

It's pretty good. There are only a few things, I didn't like:
1. To many words and too little art. Try to draw stuff to match with the words rather that just the words.
2. Most of the art was good, but some needed work.
3. A few things were repeated, I think.

That's about it, not bad man, not bad.

Leet-Productions responds:

Thanks a lot! I'd draw better with a tablet, but I can't afford one.

[TLC - Episode 6]

Not the worst

The first part is sorta funny but you should animate the second part a little more.

JacobMichaelCampbell responds:

The film? That's kinda the point.

[Work Sucks - I Quit]

It's okay

It's okay but the story isn't that good and the animation is ok. so I give it a 6.

TheMediaDemon responds:

Gokenshadow-

i got your review on my flash "work sucks-i quit". i got the same kinda of critiques from others so i know that my stories and animation needs work. hopefully you'll enjoy my next project that ill be submitting (hopefully by march 1st).

thanks again for the feedback